Chapitre 2 - Correspondances professionnelles Proposition de corrigé MEMO From: Kate Greenfield / CEO of Gardening forever To: All staff members Date: March 15th , 2021 Subject: New equity measures Entrée en matière directe As you all know, we have recently met with the company's union representatives. The following issues were addressed, as planned: underrepresentation of minorities in key positions, significant gender pay gap and biased recruitment procedures. Développement avec des détails : [on peut faire des listes de points dans une note mais il faut quand même rédiger des phrases complètes]. This recent meeting was a concluding one, after many exchanges and much negotiation. We have now collectively decided to enforce the following measures: - HS managers will review the current positions of all of our minority staff members to assess whether they are behind in terms of their career advancement. - An external auditor will review all of our female staff members' wages and draw conclusion regarding existing inequities. The audit will include a comparison with benchmarking figures of wages in our industry. - Internal recruiters will attend a specific training session to improve and update our recruiting procedures. Conclusion We rely on all of you to make these new measures a success. Thank you for your attention. Nombre de mots : 149. Quelques explications et traductions Entrée en matière directe As you all know : comme vous le savez tous we have recently met : present perfect pour indiquer une nouvelle récente with the company's union representatives : les représentants syndicaux de l'entreprise The following issues : les questions suivantes were addressed : ont été abordées ; forme passive au passé 63