LAUNCH GRADE 10: SPEAK UP! key to Mistakes on Felix Jones's Application for employment: 1. name written incorrectly (should be last name first). 2. date is incomplete (no year). 3. City and state should be written out. 4. Social Security number is hard to read (illegible). 5. Phone numbers have no area codes. 6. email address is unprofessional. 7. " Cashier " is spelled incorrectly. 8. ASAP is too informal. Available start date should read " immediately. " 9. Should specify that salary is hourly 10. Address missing 11. date of graduation should be the anticipated date of graduation (e.g., June, 20XX) 12. if applicant hasn't yet attended college, that box should be left blank or write " n/A. " 13. grammatically incorrect sentence and no period at the end of the sentence. 14. " Skills " spelled incorrectly. 15. Salary box should not be left blank. 16. reason for leaving should not be left blank. 17. " Unload " spelled incorrectly. 18. " Shelves " spelled incorrectly. 19. first and last name should be written, and last name should be capitalized. 20. Missing address 21. Pine valley High School should be capitalized and written out. 22. Missing last name 23. Wal-Mart should be capitalized. 24. " Available " spelled wrong. 25. " nights " spelled wrong. 26. " And " should be written out, not abbreviated with the letter n. 27. that space should not be used to repeat something found elsewhere on the application. 224 LeSSon 24: Job APPLiCAtionS